Experienced
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Dear [Hiring manager's name],
I am drawn to the Business Analyst position at [Company name] because of your work on [specific employer service]. My experience includes eliciting stakeholder needs and turning findings into documented recommendations, including on [relevant project].
Evidence
I used process modelling and stakeholder discussions to investigate [specific challenge], compare feasible options and gain agreement on a proposed change. My work produced [measurable result] and gave the delivery team clear requirements and success measures.
Fit
I could apply the same disciplined analysis to [specific employer priority], while maintaining constructive relationships with the people involved in the change.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss the needs of the role and the contribution I could make.
Yours sincerely,
[Your full name]