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Commis Chef cover letter example
Names, employers, and application details are invented.
Role cover letter
Updated 20 September 2026
For a junior UK commis chef application, lead with evidence of preparation and teamwork. Prospects describes junior, entry-level commis chefs assisting the chef de partie with food preparation, basic cooking and plating across various stations, following instructions carefully and working effectively as part of a team; duties vary with experience, cuisine and workplace. This page includes four complete fictional letters for different application situations and a writing guide. Use the commis chef CV guide to keep the evidence in your CV and letter consistent.
This letter shows how one fictional applicant connects evidence from their CV to a specific vacancy.
Fictional example
Names, employers, and application details are invented.
These complete fictional letters show how the evidence changes for an early-career applicant, a career change, or an internal move. Use your own truthful evidence when writing yours.
Early career
Complete fictional example
Dear Hiring Manager,
The Commis Chef role at Alderfen Hotel would let me put my college training into practice. I'm seeking my first kitchen job and want to begin with everyday preparation and cleaning.
At college, I completed practical assessments in ingredient preparation, cooking and dish presentation. My training also covered food safety and kitchen operations.
At home, I made soup for four family members to use carrots and potatoes before they spoiled. I kept the work area clean. When the soup was too thick, I added stock gradually and noted the revised quantity for another attempt.
I'm available for early, late and weekend shifts. I'd welcome the chance to discuss helping your chef team prepare for service.
Yours faithfully,
Morgan Ellis
Career change
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Dear Hiring Team,
At Merebrook Stationery, I checked deliveries against paperwork, reported missing or damaged items and followed a closing checklist. Those habits would help with delivery checks and cleaning routines in the Commis Chef role at Alderfen Hospitality.
I have completed a Level 2 qualification in Professional Cookery, including practical assessments in ingredient preparation, cooking and dish presentation. I also helped prepare and portion 90 hot meals during a community food service weekend.
I want to move from retail into cooking because I enjoyed practical cookery at college and helping prepare community meals. This would be my first paid kitchen role, and I would need guidance on your routines and service pace.
I would welcome a discussion about joining your chef team.
Yours faithfully,
Tessa Rowan
Internal move
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Dear Hiring Team,
I already help Northgate Hotel Kitchens' brigade serve up to 230 covers a day. I'd bring that experience to the internal Commis Chef vacancy in the other kitchen team.
In my current Senior Commis Chef role, I prepare mise en place and complete basic cooking across four sections to the head chef's portion and presentation specifications.
With my supervising chef's agreement, I standardised date labels and moved older stock to the front in two refrigerated storage areas. Recorded ingredient write-offs fell by 18% over six months. I'd bring the same attention to storage procedures to the new team.
I'd welcome a conversation about the team's preparation and service needs.
Yours faithfully,
Jordan Sample
Open your commis chef application letter by naming the vacancy and employer. Give a specific reason for applying, drawn from what you know about the opportunity, and briefly identify your strongest relevant evidence. Avoid an opening that could go unchanged to any employer.
Choose two or three requirements from the advert and match each to evidence you can substantiate. For example, the Commis Chef vacancy at ibis budget London Heathrow Central in Hounslow, United Kingdom, requires the ability to follow food safety procedures from storage through preparation and service, and to maintain organisation across all kitchen areas. If your target advert asks for those skills, explain the routine you followed and your own contribution. Include a measured result only when your records support it.
Use three or four short paragraphs: an opening, one or two evidence paragraphs and a closing. Explain what you did, how you did it and why it matters for this vacancy. For an experienced application, select a relevant achievement rather than recounting your employment history. For a career change, explain your reason for changing and connect previous work to the advertised duties. For an internal move, show what your current achievements would let you contribute to the new team.
Follow the application portal's file and word limits. Use short paragraphs and a readable font. If the system already collects your contact details, keep the submitted text focused on the letter. Check the layout and paragraph breaks after pasting or uploading.
Finish with a brief expression of interest in discussing your application. Use Yours sincerely after a named greeting. Use Yours faithfully after Dear Hiring Manager, Dear Hiring Team or Dear Sir or Madam. Type your full name beneath the sign-off.
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